陪你，一起听雪

文心若水 发表于 2015-11-9 20:06

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下雪了！<o:p></o:p>
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    你的声音穿越时空，是这样的惊喜，有孩子般的童真和雀跃，仿若你是第一次看见雪似的。<o:p></o:p>
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    我微笑，闭上眼睛，想象这一场雪在你的天空落下的情景。像无数的白蝴蝶，穿过时间的空寂，安静的，落在屋檐，树梢，还有你的肩上。你仰望天空的样子，深深的陶醉，而我，在你深情的眼眸里，能看到白衣胜雪的女子，轻舒广袖，从天而降，在广袤的大地上，诗意无瑕地起舞……<o:p></o:p>
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    我站在岭南枝叶青翠的林间，情不自禁地朝着北国的方向张开双臂，陪你，一起听雪。<o:p></o:p>
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    雪小禅说 ：听雪，最好是一个人听。两个都嫌多了，因为有了人气。到底这是一件没有人气的事情。只要一个人，安静下来，天地大美，雪安静地下，心里只有雪，只有雪飘下来的声音——连天地都成了陪衬。<o:p></o:p>
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这段话常常让我思忖，想是那雪应是有灵气的仙子，清颜绝世，不谙世事，可望不可即也。只有安静地听，才不会扰了她的冰清，扰了她纯洁的梦。听，静静的听，在她的呼吸里，感受天地之间的飘渺与浩瀚。簌簌......簌簌......这是她白色的裙裾在曳动，她每走一步，大地沉睡的激情就被一寸寸地激活。<o:p></o:p>
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从没见过雪的我，可以张开诗意的翅膀，任意地飞翔在情感的天空里，把她听成风吹的梨花，一瓣一瓣，迷乱了冬天的情怀；把她听成冬天的谚语，轻声细语地道出人们心中的期待；更可以，把她幻化成你，幻化成我，两两相随，相看不厌。<o:p></o:p>
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我的思绪就这样天马行空，与你相约在今冬的第一场雪里。两行蜿蜒的脚印，你中有我，我中有你。你系在我身上的红丝巾，像跳动的焰火，点燃雪花的情眸。无需言语，所有飘落的语言，都是爱的呢喃。<o:p></o:p>
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你忙着堆雪人，而我，则在一曲《苦雪烹茶》里，轻抿慢啜，静静聆听雪的绽放。小屋里，雪气袅袅，茶韵悠悠，轩窗外，梅香沁雪，天地大美。时光轻叩琴弦，所有的喧哗与浮燥悄然遁去，我的心，开出一朵一朵的莲花，以雪的纯粹，雪的恬静，雪的柔情，承接这来自天上的空灵清澈之音。<o:p></o:p>
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听雪，能让心灵静美，如雪一般，行走在没有尘埃的世界，物我两忘。<o:p></o:p>
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我多想，把自己种植在你的那一片土地上，恣意地感受你如雪光般纯洁的思念。<o:p></o:p>
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    当你，牵我的手，走在雪中时，爱情就在雪花里开出冰清玉洁的模样，我们走着走着，一不小心，就白了头......                                                                  2015年11月9日<A style="Z-INDEX: 2147483647; BORDER-BOTTOM: 0px; POSITION: absolute; BORDER-LEFT: 0px; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0px; MARGIN: 0px; PADDING-LEFT: 0px; WIDTH: 60px; PADDING-RIGHT: 0px; HEIGHT: 25px; VISIBILITY: hidden; BORDER-TOP: 0px; TOP: 0px; CURSOR: pointer; BORDER-RIGHT: 0px; PADDING-TOP: 0px; LEFT: 0px" id=bing-msbbp-search-anchor target=_blank><IMG style="Z-INDEX: 2147483647; BORDER-BOTTOM: 0px; POSITION: absolute; FILTER: alpha(opacity=100) !important; BORDER-LEFT: 0px; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0px; MARGIN: 0px; PADDING-LEFT: 0px; WIDTH: 60px; PADDING-RIGHT: 0px; HEIGHT: 25px; VISIBILITY: hidden; BORDER-TOP: 0px; TOP: 0px; CURSOR: pointer; BORDER-RIGHT: 0px; PADDING-TOP: 0px; LEFT: 0px; opacity: 1" id=bing-msbbp-search-img 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文心若水 发表于 2015-11-9 20:07

探戈发表于 2015-11-9 20:26

......这是她白色的裙裾在曳动，她每走一步，大地沉睡的激情就被一寸寸地激活。
雪和雪的比拟,都超脱凡俗

探戈发表于 2015-11-9 20:29

从没见过雪的我，可以张开诗意的翅膀，任意地飞翔在情感的天空里，把她听成风吹的梨花，一瓣一瓣，迷乱了冬天的情怀；把她听成冬天的谚语，轻声细语地道出人们心中的期待；更可以，把她幻化成你，幻化成我，两两相随，相看不厌。

铺排使行文疏密有致

探戈发表于 2015-11-9 20:32

你忙着堆雪人，而我，则在一曲《苦雪烹茶》里，轻抿慢啜，静静聆听雪的绽放。小屋里，雪气袅袅，茶韵悠悠，轩窗外，梅香沁雪，天地大美。时光轻叩琴弦，所有的喧哗与浮燥悄然遁去，我的心，开出一朵一朵的莲花，以雪的纯粹，雪的恬静，雪的柔情，承接这来自天上的空灵清澈之音。

对比和比较在行文中巧妙穿插,读来浑然不觉,但形神的凸现是处处能感觉得到的

探戈发表于 2015-11-9 20:32

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文心若水 发表于 2015-11-9 21:31

探戈发表于 2015-11-9 20:26 static/image/common/back.gif
......这是她白色的裙裾在曳动，她每走一步，大地沉睡的激情就被一寸寸地激活。
雪和雪的比拟,都超脱凡俗

哈哈，谢谢探戈，我没看过雪，瞎想象一番的。

文心若水 发表于 2015-11-9 21:32

探戈发表于 2015-11-9 20:29 static/image/common/back.gif
从没见过雪的我，可以张开诗意的翅膀，任意地飞翔在情感的天空里，把她听成风吹的梨花，一瓣一瓣，迷乱了冬 ...

谢谢探戈老师，说起散文，你是行家啊。

文心若水 发表于 2015-11-9 21:33

探戈发表于 2015-11-9 20:32 static/image/common/back.gif
你忙着堆雪人，而我，则在一曲《苦雪烹茶》里，轻抿慢啜，静静聆听雪的绽放。小屋里，雪气袅袅，茶韵悠悠， ...

嘿嘿，这是不是散文中的一种写作手法？空了多多指教我啊！

文心若水 发表于 2015-11-9 21:34

探戈发表于 2015-11-9 20:32 static/image/common/back.gif

掌声响起来，我心飞扬~{:6_1085:}

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